Together alone.
By night.
You come.
Holding me.
Making love.
Your gone.
Never here.
Half awake'.
Faint scent.
Ghost taste.
Fading memory.
Grasp ahold.
Slip away.
Into pain.
Loss remains.
Together alone.
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Poem Commentary
One of those dreams that when you wake leaves you with a real taste and oder that you can remember then it fades leaving you to wish you could retrieve the memory and or smell or taste.
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Rhymer commented on Together alone.
01-10-2010
- I like the dream state, sometimes, with this I feel the yearning for the dream to reveal more. 10 from me.
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themommyof2 commented on Together alone.
12-10-2009
- Interesting read. Thinking........................
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12/11/2009
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