Too High

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Too High

The chaos in my mind~
                                  my life~
                                            overwhelms.
                              Unbearable.
Confusion jabs at my soul~
                                 leaving bruises~
                                          causing reckless fantasy.
                         Unsubstantiated fear.
Momentarily on top of the world~
                                impulsively jumping~
                                           into the darkest pit.
                              Despair.
Non-existence.                                       Simplicity.

You've taken me too far above reality.
                              If I fall from this height~
                                                  I may not survive.

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harmony74 commented on Too High

07-31-2009

"if i fall from this high I might not survie"..I absolutely love your words..very creative by far! U do so well with your exspression : ) Well done indeed..I love love love it!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

chrisi’s Poems (19)

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When You Sleep 0
Too High 1
Tattoo 3
Little Girl Lost - Part 2 1
You Didn't Destroy Me 0
Confrontation 2
Discover Me 2
Insomnia 0
Ciao' Babe 1
enabling disability 2
Openly Me 0
Reluctant Gift 0
Escape Artist 1
Somewhere In The Middle 4
Afterglow 0
Whispers In My Mind 2
The Woman Found In Me – Part 2 3
Little Girl Lost - Part 1 1
I Believe You 1