Too Late

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    Too Late

    Im sitting in this church
    within deep search.

    Searching for the one that I admire,
    hoping he approaches me in his formal attire.

    He appears with those gorgeos eyes'
    that make me have butterflies.

    That gorgeous smile,
    that makes me blush wild

    Wait what do I see,
    a girl looking at me.

    The site broke me down,
    all i could do was frown.

    Now I'm reminiscing on the time we spent together,
    playing in the summer wheather.

    Next time I wont wait,
    because I dont want to be too late.

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    IsraelDenim commented on Too Late

    06-10-2009

    Aww...Better luck next time, lol. Naw seriously though, this is nice, I give you a perfect ten for this pieace of literature. Keep writing yo, and you will be a splendid poet in no time. 1LOVE

    hdmac commented on Too Late

    06-10-2009

    Remember to capitalize all your "I" s. "Butterflies" is also a cliche. Try to stay away from using language that is too common and you can write better poetry.

    Ladycub

    06/10/2009

    Thanks

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    06/10/2009

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    06/10/2009

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    06/10/2009

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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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