Turn the lights down low

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    Poem Commentary

    The title is also the first line.

    Turn the lights down low

     It's that time of night
    Bring the temperature down
    It's a bit too high
    Separate the waste
    Or there will be a fine
    Careful what words you use
    They decided it's not right
    For people to be left alone
    To simply live their lives
    So turn the lights low

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    pengname commented on Turn the lights down low

    07-04-2009

    Great! I like the simplistic flow. Frightening to think there might one day actually be a time for "lights out"
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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