uneven

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    uneven

     I had your heart and my heart to lose in this game now that were apart I know whos heart still remained you easily moved on while I felt the pain theres nothing left atleast of me here to claim

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    DirtyLilSecret commented on uneven

    06-01-2009

    Good poem, short sweet and to the point and it is very true. Even though it is short i can tell what you mean and it has very good imagry
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    Tetsugin

    06/01/2009

    thanks I liked yours too

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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