You never replied

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  • Lost Love

    You never replied

    Im waitin till I see you or maybe I'll call some time and make my mind see through just waitin for a chance you can make my (skyes) clear blue and hopefully youll get my message or clue of what im tryin to tell you or maybe you wont....maybe you will end up all alone looking back home and wishing you replied to this poem.

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    graceladymn commented on You never replied

    08-30-2009

    You would have more success being straight out about your love instead of putting out clues, for clues are easily overlooked. Love must become bold enough to embody the self and declare what it desires to shout.

    Tetsugin

    08/30/2009

    i just dont have the confidence to say how i truely feel...this is embarrassing..

    harmony74

    08/30/2009

    your embarrassed? Why would u be embarrassed? Hope u find the courage ..life is short ..

    harmony74 commented on You never replied

    05-31-2009

    Ahh "gettin" it..some dont get the clues one is trying to send eh..I know i am a product of not getting it right away..LOL..U ought to just be clear..

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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