something like a song

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    ok i was just listening to this track and writting lyrics to it....no idea if it will work
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0qX1AhJZL6o&feature=related

    something like a song

    im just a dreamer of dreams that wants to see what it means to be free of these controling feigns

    take me away on these wings and i hope that it brings my whole lifes withholdings

    you left at dawn, i never saw, all the calls missed and now gone

     im feeling sick and tired of the wait and i just cant seem to find an escape     that leads to places I can awaken find my peace but then i am shaken from this dream to societies race then left to think was i held to asleep

    held to sleep?

    was i held to sleep

    held to sleep

    was i held to sleep....

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    1990lh commented on something like a song

    09-25-2009

    that was beautiful luv it great job i'm sure it will sound nice with music. plz keep up the great writing
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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