UNEXPLAINABLE FEELINGS

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    • samuelj
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    UNEXPLAINABLE FEELINGS

     A minute passes by and my mind goes quiet
    I've been searching for hours for the reason
    I know everthing happens in season
    But as far as I can feel......so be it
    What's going on
    Inside
    Outside
    Beside
    My life
    I feel as if there's such a void
    The niceness I hear of since childwood
     Life......I've worked to be good so it should
    Never worry they say you not alone
    The world is for all to call home
    I'm feeling like I'm along for a ride
    His life
    Her life
    Sons life
    Daughters life 
    Good thing I believe in a higher power
    I kneel and pray for better
    Everyday to be better than the other
    Whom I meet will be equal in spirit
    Everyday I'll be thankful for it

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    GentleT commented on UNEXPLAINABLE FEELINGS

    09-23-2009

    I sense a disappointment in your life from this poem. It is hard to work though them but maybe we learn and become wiser for it.
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    samuelj

    09/23/2009

    It's and the things one strive for and it appears at time to be so far away from the vision but I try to remember that The Most High(GOD) has the bigger plan and I've got to be patient....Thanks for your insight it's truly appreciated

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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