WE HURT 2

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    • samuelj
    • Working hard to get my book to reach the streets

    WE HURT 2
    IT STARTED OUT AZ A LUV AFFAIR
    I CARE
    U CARE
    I TOLD U I'LL BE THERE
    U TOLD ME U WILL BE 2
    BOTH PLEDGING 2 BE FAITHFUL N TRUE
    THEN A STRANGE THING HAPPENED
    UNKIND WORDS WUZ SAID
    OUT CAME THE REAL U
    FEELING THAT A MAN CAN'T BE TRUE
    THEN YOU DID WHAT I'D NEVER DO
    U HURT ME
    U BROKE MY HEART
    TELLING ME I'M A MAN
    SO THAT MEANS I DON'T HAVE ONE
    A HEART BROKEN IN 2
    NOW HURT DOESN'T KNOW WHAT 2 DO
    ALL I KNOW IS MEN HURT 2
    PIERCING
    RIVETING
    SPIRALLING
    IS MY FEELING INSIDE ALL HURT
    ALL I CAN SAY IS MEN HURT 2

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    Lioness commented on WE HURT 2

    02-05-2011

    I know, you men get hurt too, yet you have this great ability to hide it, making us women believe that men's heart are made of stone.
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    optimistic commented on WE HURT 2

    05-22-2009

    I enjoyed this poem this was excellent yet I go on this journey with you and want to know who that what poetry is this is great
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    joecool commented on WE HURT 2

    05-22-2009

    you know thank you for this poem cause i needed to read this just to let me know that men hurt .thank you again i enjoyed it
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    samuelj

    09/20/2009

    At times we need a voice

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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