Unfortunatley

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    Unfortunatley

    So here I was thinking we belonged
    but all I have now is a broken heart

    The minute you said "I Love You"
    I didn't want to live without you

    Now that you have hurt me
    it's time I turn tail and leave

    I am worthy of Love and Compassion
    Sometimes it felt all we had was Passion

    So sadly I thought much more of us
    And I hate to see us end
    But what am I to do
    When all is clearly making me blue

    Unfortunatley...

    My life is not well with you.

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    dragonfly1023 commented on Unfortunatley

    07-25-2009

    there's a very thin line between passion and love. "My life is not well with you." powerful ending to this experience. great write
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    LittleLady34

    07/25/2009

    Thank you soo much on your comment. I'm glad this poem was a great write for you.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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