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    silken words

    pour from

    your ever sweet lips

    simple phrases

    that i have

    a need to hear

    fear grips me

    as i contemplate

    if my mind

    body soul

    is strong enough

    to withstand

    love and perhaps loss

    to love and lose

    is wisdom

    but to love and keep

    is an addiction

    i need to see

    the calming of my addiction

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    Pisces00 commented on untitled

    08-27-2009

    This is beyond beautiful. I love how you made it in a somewhat spiritual theme also while at the same time avoiding the over use of hyperbolies. Its simple and yet carries a meaning anyone could have felt in at least one point in their lives. Kudos

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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