Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard


Poem Commentary

Whenever I am in need of spiritual comfort and direction I turn to Walt Whitman’s “Leaves Of Grass”, for there is no book that centers me, calms me, and gives me spiritual bearing like this collection of truths, triumphs, and defeats. Where the Bible is a book of fantasies, mythology, and disturbing contradictions, “Leaves Of Grass” is a reality to hold in your heart and soul, to comprehend with out having to be interpreted by anybody but yourself. “Leaves Of Grass” should be nominated to replace the Bible as the book of honorable truths and proper spiritual development. Whitman was The Second Coming.

Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard



To read this poem, look for my forth-coming second book
due in late-summer 2011 from Stillpoint Press.

contact: www.mystillpoint.net.

Thankn you,

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sk8erpoet commented on Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard


Walt Whitman was and is one of the greatest writers that ever existed. Leaves of Grass is a Book I also turn to when I need an escape or some guidance. Great Write and thoughts. -sk8



Thank you, and to read this poem, one must find a copy of my book, 'The Second Coming'. Looking forward!

gothgirl1218 commented on Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard


hey dah i am so sorry for not getting a chance to read ur poem but i did so recently read it an to tell u i am very intregged by it it is very inlighting an i am truely and honestly inpressed of what i read you are an amazing poet you have an amazing talent i was so asstounded in what i read i am sorry for my misspelling an i am sorry for being late on reading dis wonderful poem



thank you and this poem will be in my forth-coming second book due in late-summer 2011. I am at www.21stcenturypoets.com. looking forward...

AmadeusEx commented on Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard


youre really really good...i think i misinterpreted the other poems i read of yours but im truly impressed by this one, or maybe i was annoyed by your talent, which is highly probable, but dont hold that against me, im really digging your stuff tonight, great poem dahl



AmadeusEx, CONGRATULATIONS! You are the 100th person to comment on this winning poem, and because of this you have won a free copy of my book, In Forbidden Language, inscribed to you. Send me a PM with instructions as to mailing this prize to you. And thank you for this high praise. Peace and Light, dah

countrypoet commented on Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard


Dah, Thank you my friend for asking me to read this very unique and well written poem.I have always enjoyed reading Walt's poetry,just as I enjoy reading yours. You both have a very special way of making a person feel centered with all of the universe and very calm and spiritual.Love and light. Terry



happy to please... thank you C Poet!

tenderpoison commented on Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard


this is quite the write - here is where I have to admit that I am altogether unfamiliar with the poetry of Mr. Whitman, so will make no pretense at making an informed comment! however - I think he'd have to be honored Dahl - XX Tender



I am honored by this comment... not to mention flattered... thank you...

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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