WEEPING WILLOW TREE

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    WEEPING WILLOW TREE

    NOTICE THE SADNESS IN ITS' NAME
    WEEPING SO SILENTLY
    WHO IS TO BLAME?
    BENEATH THIS TREE I SHALL LAY
    WITH ALL ITS' BEAUTY ON DISPLAY

    SWAYING GENTLY IN THE BREEZE
    I'LL SIT AMONG THE FLOWING LEAVES
    SO GRACEFULLY IT REACHES ROUND
    TO LET ITS' BRANCHES TOUCH THE GROUND

    THE TRUNK IS STRONG & VERY HARD
    ITS' ROOTS STRETCH OUT ACROSS THE YARD
    IT LOOKS SO SAD OR DEEPLY DEPRESSED
    TO HIDE ITS' FACE IN ALL THAT DRESS

    SO THIS THE PLACE I CHOOSE TO BE
    ALONE BENEATH THIS WEEPING TREE
    I WILL HIDE RIGHT HERE AMONG THE LEAVES
    AND WATCH THEM DANCE AS LONG AS I PLEASE.
    CHERYL COATES

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    GentleT commented on WEEPING WILLOW TREE

    06-03-2009

    The willow is indeed a beautiful tree. You have expressed your admiration for it well in this poem. But remember to take your heart from the willow and sing too.

    kenparme commented on WEEPING WILLOW TREE

    04-24-2009

    Well written-soothing and peaceful rhyme.Very nice.

    drewking commented on WEEPING WILLOW TREE

    01-05-2009

    nice, a soothing poem for me.. good work..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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