When I'm With You

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    When I'm With You

    When I’m with you it’s as if I’m frozen in time
    As if your heart beat stops and becomes one with mine
    As if nothing else exists except for you and me
    And passion for each other is all that we can see
    When I’m with you it’s as if my heart beats through my chest
    That I could ever feel this way, I never would have guessed
    You look me in the eyes and I slowly begin to melt
    Because true feelings like this before, I have never felt
    When I’m with you it’s as if I’m your lucky charm
    Or at least that’s how I feel when you hold me in your arms
    Like a thundering waterfall, my blood flows through my veins
    Every time you hold my hand, and every time you say my name
    When I’m with you it’s as if you take my breath away
    As if time dissolves and night turns into day
    But if I could really control time, do you know what I would do?
    I’d keep turning back the clock hands so I could spend forever with you.

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    bforibus commented on When I'm With You

    02-08-2009

    wow. deep and full of emotion. i loved the devotion in this. cant wait to read more

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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