When Will We All Care?

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  • kyma63
  • is looking for an outlet for my feelings and thoughts. If I make a few friends along the way GREAT!

When Will We All Care?

Our world is slowly dieing.
The air is filled with the needy crying,
Some from an illness that causes pain,
Others from hunger as they hang their head in shame.
What will it take for someone to care?
When will these cries cease to fill the air?
An elderly woman sits alone in her home waiting for her life to end,
Loneliness eating away at her soul and all she wants is a friend.
A young child whimpers as they slowly and reluctantly walk home;
They tremble in fear of the abuse that awaits, bruises and broken
bones.
What will it take for someone to care?
When will these cries cease to fill the air?
With all of the accomplishments mankind has made in medicine,
Why hasn't something been done to stop people from suffering
pain again and again.
All the food in the world and there are still many children who die daily from starvation,
If more people don't start thinking of their fellow man there'll be
no hope for the world's salvation.
It only takes an outstretched hand to show that one cares,
It takes but an apple, an ear to listen and/or a phone call to lessen the cries of suffering in the air.
When will we all care?

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Hampton commented on When Will We All Care?

09-06-2009

Nice job . A very heartfelt poem. See my poem Hunger,

nettieforce1 commented on When Will We All Care?

08-18-2009

although the poem is awkward and needs some revision, it is very good. i usually find rhyming poetry forced and almost silly, this writer makes it work for the most part. the content is extremely ably presented; i felt so touched that i had tears in my eyes and my stomach is still clenched as i write this. you have succeeded in the most important task of poetry: you move the reader.

heartmindsoul commented on When Will We All Care?

08-15-2009

ABSOLUTELY ON THE MONEY, AND WRITTEN BEAUTIFULY, HOPE TO READ SOME MORE .THANK YOU

kyma63

08/15/2009

Thank you for taking the time to read my piece. I am glad that you liked it. I hope you enjoy more of my pieces and would greatly like to hear your opinions and feelings about them. I wish you well with your future endeavors.kyma63

laydbak1 commented on When Will We All Care?

08-08-2009

You couldn't have said it any better or been more thorough Kyma... Sanity is relevant thing amongst the so-called civilized people's of the world, but there's nothing sane about tolerating or accepting the sufferings we have the power to intercede and help to change for the better... There are somethings in this world that we do not decide for ourselves, but compassion isn't one of them... Good write....

kyma63

08/11/2009

If only more people would see and feel what we do and took the time to realize that there's so much that they could do if only they would. Thank You for taking the time and especially thank you for your comments. I am so glad that someone finally took the time to read and express their thoughts about my work. Take care, Keep a smile on your face and a laugh in your heart. Kyma63

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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