Windsong

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Windsong


                                         april’s ember
                                         long denied
                                         waits for me
                                         behind blue eyes
                                         heart calls gently
                                         in the breeze
                                         mine’s like a kite
                                         hung in the trees
                                         string worn bare
                                         almost broken
                                         tail torn off
                                         fabric open
                                         feel the wind
                                         slowly shifting
                                         winter lingers
                                         in the distance
                                         dawn's kind smile
                                         parts the haze
                                         says don’t give up
                                         love finds a way


                                      
                                                 Runnells, Iowa '09

                                                                                      Jerry Browning © 2009

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jenifer commented on Windsong

06-10-2013

It reminds me of a combination of Emily Dickinson and Robert frost.

castlemist

06/10/2013

what a great comment...thank you jenifer

ayyan commented on Windsong

03-26-2013

wonderful writing and everyone will like this for the hunman livings and all

castlemist

03/26/2013

thank you ayyan

Earthlylove commented on Windsong

12-16-2012

Wow! beautiful.... whimsical and magical. This poem denotes a sense of true poetry!

Jasminalone commented on Windsong

12-07-2011

Glorious piece of work! I love the way your wind song imprints an optimistic effect on the reader's mind.So much enjoyed.

castlemist

12/07/2011

Thank you Jasminalone....I'm happy it touch you

Redhead505 commented on Windsong

01-24-2011

Fifty character adding up to basically "ditto" to the other comments I made on your work. Bravo! Thanks again for sharing.

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