wrong path in life


wrong path in life

So you've chosen the wrong path 
you've done all that you thought was "FUN"
and soon enough u will not be able to "RUN"
sooner or later you start to go through pain
and now you're starting to go insane
you've become so vain
now it's your dignity that you must regain

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cmlestrade commented on wrong path in life


Brief but very good and to the point. The theme and the rhyming were good.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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