wrong road!!!

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    wrong road!!!

    sitting in the car, focus on the path,
    so many roads to choose from,
    which one is my path.
    go left, go right, all dead ends in sight,
    been walking backwards my whole life,
    just tryin to be right.
    so many times of slipping and falling,
    crawling on the ground,
    when sucess is above me.
    granted the wisdom that life has taught me.
    i was told not to worry about food or clothes,
    it was already granted to me.
    but i worry about food and clothes ,
    and that is what henders me,
    from achieving peace of mind,
    no worries just like a baby.
    i lose focus of my path, to go left and grab that J.
    puff three times and i high to the face.
    fazed out, from the world for a min,
    tic tic tic, time keeps ticking.

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    frog commented on wrong road!!!

    08-29-2009

    I sensed a lot of fear reading this...and it's all too familiar...afraid of making a mistake...trying so hard that one can barely see the path at all from the fear...and ultimately afraid of running out of time...you expressed these emotions so well...

    GucciGurl commented on wrong road!!!

    05-11-2009

    Got a little lost along the way

    MissElRene commented on wrong road!!!

    04-18-2009

    I can relate somewhat... strong beginning you started to lose me toward the end... OVERALL NICE! PROPS!

    NayInLove commented on wrong road!!!

    04-17-2009

    this was really nice keep it up!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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