You Drive Me Crazy

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I wrote this in dedication to my husband.

You Drive Me Crazy

My mind is going crazy over you,
I love you so much, but sometimes you make me so blue.
You do not seem to understand or care,
About the love for you I want to share.
You tell me one thing one day then something else the next,
It gets difficult sometimes to understand your text.
Sometimes we drive each other crazy,
And you make it sound like I am lazy.
When I want to do something and you don't; there is no problem,
But when the tables are turned; then there is a major problem.

My love for you will never die,
Not even when we reach for the sky.
For we are meant to be together from birth,
And we will still be together when our bodies are in the dirt.

My love for you is extremely true,
Just as the sky is a pretty blue.
So, now here I go- My love for you I now send,
Because I will love you until the very end.

My love for you will survive,
Because even at the end it will thrive.
From coast to coast and from sea to sea,
With you is the only place I want to be.

For noone understands each other all of the time,
We are just lucky that we do some of the time.

With each and every day that passes,
Our love for each other grows just like the grass.\
We ant to always be together,
And even want to raise a family together.
So, when times get rough,
And we put each other through so much stuff,
We just have to remember,
The love from our sender,
Who puts us together to strive,
Knowing full well that we will survive.

My love for you always will be,
From now and for eternity.
You have started a spark,
That will forever fill my heart.

Each and every day my love for you grows,
Just like a budding rose that can not wait to show,
All of the brillant and wonderful colors that it has,
Each time you see a rose, look up and you will not be sad.
For god is up there watching all of his creations,
And it is up to you to feel the sensations.
My love for you is like my love for god- It will never die,
So, my love, please don't ever doubt it or sye!!!

                                                            S.Wesley

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Mandi commented on You Drive Me Crazy

06-28-2011

Your rhyming and words flow well. Everything just seems to fall into place. Was it that easy to write? That is what I like about poetry.... If rhyming doesn't fit then free verse is there to use.

staceyw

06/28/2011

This one was easier to write than a few of the others. It was stuck in my head and when I started it just flowed together.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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