You Said

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  • Allie
  • In Love and ready to start writting again.

You Said

You said
you would always be there
You said
you would always be a friend
But time
and time again
you left me hanging by a thread.
You left me
floating on a endless sea
For you my anchor
was no where to be
seen.
So 
I will just keep on drifting
far away
with no life support lighthouse
to guide my way.

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Tony5880 commented on You Said

10-15-2013

I like this poem I am a similar situation its matrimonial bless

lonewolf commented on You Said

01-30-2010

nicely written. never give up your dream of true love. one day he will come.

Kaiprin commented on You Said

12-01-2009

Hmm, this seems very distant; it's message feels like an invitation to heartbreak. I like it. Good stuff.

spbsdude commented on You Said

09-29-2009

Whoever left you affected you deeply. I've read three of your poems now and they all send that message. So much is said in just a few words. Beautifully done.

MOMofTWINS commented on You Said

07-14-2009

While reading this I read between the lines... I hear a strong person who accepts that she was disappointed and is going to keep her head held high and keep walking; slowly and maybe unsteady at first, but shes going to keep walking... Wonderful job, Allie dear.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

Allie’s Poems (13)

Title Comments
Title Comments
You Said 8
Forever 6
Drifting 3
Unsettled 2
Through time 7
Search 1
A Letter To You, (Part !) 2
Untitled 0
Not right 5
Forgotten 3
What is peace? 2
Untitled 1
Slumber Bliss 3