youth
these pale moon slivers crave red love
these open wounds reside in
these scars of treason
each moment a melody of confusion
youth
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10-08-2010
- I like this reflection in words. You write an interesting poem. Dwell in love, peace and freedom, Olan.
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03-29-2010
- This is so beautifully surreal, passionate, and revealing. Gorgeous imagery! Bravo!!
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mustascheman commented on youth
03-26-2010
- It's funny because with a title like that you could have gotten away with just the last line and it still would have made perfect sence! Cool.
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