A New Feeling
The world that surrounds me has shown me, among many feeling in which only our intelligence can portray, a most saddened light in people. Time has brought life to its knees begging for a new emotion. The chemical flickers that create a bind to heart and mind, have the heart in pain from sorrow. A never ending eternity can bring promises of such an emotion. Locked away in the essence of life. Suspended in time, the secret to finding such a treasure is still a secret. One can only hope, as our intelligence becomes stronger or weaker, in an enlace of our creations and ourselves, down the line of time, a new order, of unknown origin, an Arcanum. One can only hope I can feel a new way.A New Feeling
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I wrote this a few days ago theres no rhyming aspect at all but i will still classify it as a poem.
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andromedalinnea commented on A New Feeling
08-13-2009
- hay love as always you seem to rise up and grabthe very nads of literature and make him scurm and riggle to your desire, a true master of words you are
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amierochelle commented on A New Feeling
08-11-2009
- This is really really good Amanda. And I kind of like that it doesn't rhyme, because it all comes together nicely, so it doesnt really need to...good for you, i hope you get published:)
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