The world behind the Mask

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    The world behind the Mask

    I have always known i am apart of the world of virtue and elegance,
    but to an extent where darkness fades into light,
    and when day is blanketed by night.
    An invisible wind carries fair thoughts into a violent storm of angry & sad drops.
    Raining on this world of virtue and despair, where the prayers and wishes go unheard.
    When good luck and fortune go to the undeserved,
    and the elegance of this dreamland is wasted on the common man,
    who spreads the filth,
    onto innocent minds,
    and shows us how the world is unkind

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    arfin09 commented on The world behind the Mask

    02-28-2009

    "when good luck...the undeserved" liked. narrow the view a bit and bite more with the end.

    andromedalinnea commented on The world behind the Mask

    02-28-2009

    your beautiful writer, very much depth.

    ozzydio18 commented on The world behind the Mask

    02-27-2009

    please dont ever give up you are a great writer with a great understanding of of life you are a very good writer....

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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