All is calm

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    This are the lyrics to a song that is as soothing as the words.

    All is calm

     All is dark here and the moon
    illuminates the shapes
    our bodies make in the shade
    all I can see is your silhouette
                     ~o~
    All is calm in here
    all is peace in here
    and we don't even need to say
    I love you
                     ~o~
    When the morning comes
    I love to see your smile
    reminds me of green fields
    where you can feel the sun shine
                     ~o~
    All is calm in here
    all is peace in here
    and we don't even need to say
    I love you

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    mufasa commented on All is calm

    08-09-2009

    Written with feeling, and nice flow.you are so multi talented .I think this is my favorite.
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    Wallysaruman

    08/09/2009

    Thank you. I wanted to express a feeling that requires no words to be expressed. Exept, the only way to do that is explaining it with words, hehe.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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