Subtlety

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    • Wallysaruman
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    Lyrics to a song composed by a friend.

    Subtlety
    look up there
    can you see
    faces in the clouds?
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hatred in my eyes?
                 ~o~
    When you look around
    you will probably find
    what I'm all about
    and how I'm gonna play
                 ~o~
    Maybe you're confused
    even maybe amused
    at the facts of this
    hide and seek charade
                 ~o~
    when you try to run
    i can see you warmth
    and you're just the prey
    in this sick old game
                 ~o~
    I love you in my wrath
    another reason why
    you come back to me
    with much subtlety
                 ~o~
    look around
    can you see
    people in the sky
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hunger in my mind
    look up there
    can you see
    faces in the clouds?
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hatred in my eyes?
                 ~o~
    When you look around
    you will probably find
    what I'm all about
    and how I'm gonna play
                 ~o~
    Maybe you're confused
    even maybe amused
    at the facts of this
    hide and seek charade
                 ~o~
    when you try to run
    i can see you warmth
    and you're just the prey
    in this sick old game
                 ~o~
    I love you in my wrath
    another reason why
    you come back to me
    with much subtlety
                 ~o~
    look around
    can you see
    people in the sky
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hunger in my mind

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    mufasa commented on Subtlety

    08-09-2009

    l love the play on words,and the emotions thah comes with them is real and tangible. Keep writing. Lovely.
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    jademelissa74 commented on Subtlety

    08-02-2009

    Nice lyrics. I like the imagery used to composed the piece. Kudos to the writer. :))
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    Wallysaruman

    08/03/2009

    Thanks for your support! I will be posting many more, soon. And yes, they're all mine.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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