All Just Me
He or Shei'm just me
so let me free
and screw socity
No sword
But a key
Is what i need
To unlock the seam
and let moon light stream
Because its all just me
All Just Me
3 Comments
Poem Commentary
idk i just got bordi'm just me
so let me free
and screw socity
No sword
But a key
Is what i need
To unlock the seam
and let moon light stream
Because its all just me
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blvdobd2009 commented on All Just Me
09-13-2010
- You are living proof that it doesn't take a thousand words to convey a message... This is eloquence at it's finest. It is straight to the point, and not loaded with unnecessary wordage... I just love it from top to bottom, only if the world would accept us all as we are, there would be no need for your great enlightenment, a blessing to this world your words are, thank you ten from me...
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ApaqRasgirl commented on All Just Me
08-19-2010
- a very nice passionate write, loved your style.....thanks for the great read.....love asha
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dahlusion commented on All Just Me
08-19-2010
- simply beautiful in a john lennon-like playfulness. bravo! peace and light, dah
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