Can You See Me?

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    Can You See Me?
    I scream
    I shout
    I yell
    I pout

    Can you hear me?

    I ask
    I pry
    I run
    Like a spy

    Can you speak to me?

    I punch
    I throw
    I smack
    I mold

    Can you feel me?

    I jump
    Up high
    And touch
    The sky

    Can you see me?

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Can You See Me?

    07-21-2010

    really nice job here. attention is good, but im not one for it. good write, keep writing :)
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    Rhymer commented on Can You See Me?

    04-10-2010

    We all like to be noticed, included, and above all seen. Excellent write 10 from me.
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