Alone,Exiled,and Disdained

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    Alone,Exiled,and Disdained

    Silence builds an awful wreackage of a girl.

    It feeds on lonliness and creates a void.

    Grey shadows haunt and torment and torture.

    A teenager is stricken and destroyed.

    There is no sound of laughter or happiness here.

    The little one has thrown in the towel today.

    Somber,melancholy moods decay the soul.

    its futile to hope and dream and pray.

    Emptiness builds a home in the woman,this girl,this child were hollows have bred.

    A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes,and eats away at every connecting thread.

    Confusion feeds like a savage inside of her,leaving her there worthless.

    Destained to walk through life less ordinary.

    Alone,Exiled,and Disdained.

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    kmfreshh commented on Alone,Exiled,and Disdained

    06-26-2011

    wow that is heart wrenchingly tragic yet so well depicted to convey the struggle. great poem keep it up

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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