Am I?

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Am I?

Am I Someone?
Am I Nobody?
Am I surrounded by Light?
Or Am I alone in the Dark?
Am I someone who you Remember?
or Am I someone who you try to Forget?
Am I your best Friend?
or Am I your greatest Foe?
Am I high above Mountains?
or Am I lower than the creaves of the Ocean?
Am I  surrounded with Angels?
or Am I stranded with Demons?
Am I entirely Alive?
or Am I gradually Dying?
Am I consciously Awake?
or Am I deep in Sleep?
Am I the purest of the Holy?
or Am I the cursed of the Damned?
Am I me?
or Am I you?
Am I...
Am I...




 Be Original (2009)

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BikemanRJ commented on Am I?

03-03-2010

I like the way you have left all of these open ended questions and that the reader has to contemplate their own answers good word flow and lay out. Bikeman

Mitzi commented on Am I?

03-03-2010

This poem is absolutely beautiful...I think so many times we spend most of our lives trying to figure out who we are, but in all actuality the answers are right in front of us...The comments you left were so moving and they really inspired me..I thank you so much for what you said because it trulu meant alot!!

dahlusion commented on Am I?

02-28-2010

A lovely meandering of deep thoughts. You may like my poem: "i am". Peace and Light, Dah

Ming commented on Am I?

02-24-2010

Good poem . . . Great Questions I hope one day you find the answers. . . -Ming

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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