Sinful Dedication

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Sinful Dedication

Aware of my undeniable fate.
Remorsefully Acknowledging the Inevitable
Day by Day I begin to decay
            ....
Breathing in the filth of the world
Exhale the Devil
            ....
A Prisoner to Sin
I am Cuffed to a burden that weights a Million and One pounds
Tossed into the depths of the tarnishing world
I begin to drowned
            ....
My life is my breath
It slowly seeps away
My lungs collaspe
I find myself in a tranquil haze
            ....
Captivated in this altered daze
In this euphoric state of mind
I am enlightened to know I have always been confinded
Confined to sin till the extent of my days
            ....
Accept my fate
Sin dedication, I slip away
As I drowned in this euphhori daze
My end begins





                                         Be Original (2010)

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dahlusion commented on Sinful Dedication

03-04-2010

to live is to breathe, on the average, we breathe 18,000 breaths per day, so i don't think your breath is slipping away that fast. a good concept in a dark way.

JudeDruid commented on Sinful Dedication

03-03-2010

wow powerful i love it ! absolutly ah-mazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kage commented on Sinful Dedication

03-03-2010

great work i really like it, just good word flow and wording, i did see two mistakes in the writing lines 10 and 11 but all in all it is a great poem

UnoMono

03/04/2010

I appreciate your observation very much..I shall correct it asap..thank you sir.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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