Sinful Dedication

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Sinful Dedication

Aware of my undeniable fate.
Remorsefully Acknowledging the Inevitable
Day by Day I begin to decay
            ....
Breathing in the filth of the world
Exhale the Devil
            ....
A Prisoner to Sin
I am Cuffed to a burden that weights a Million and One pounds
Tossed into the depths of the tarnishing world
I begin to drowned
            ....
My life is my breath
It slowly seeps away
My lungs collaspe
I find myself in a tranquil haze
            ....
Captivated in this altered daze
In this euphoric state of mind
I am enlightened to know I have always been confinded
Confined to sin till the extent of my days
            ....
Accept my fate
Sin dedication, I slip away
As I drowned in this euphhori daze
My end begins





                                         Be Original (2010)

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dahlusion commented on Sinful Dedication

03-04-2010

to live is to breathe, on the average, we breathe 18,000 breaths per day, so i don't think your breath is slipping away that fast. a good concept in a dark way.

JudeDruid commented on Sinful Dedication

03-03-2010

wow powerful i love it ! absolutly ah-mazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kage commented on Sinful Dedication

03-03-2010

great work i really like it, just good word flow and wording, i did see two mistakes in the writing lines 10 and 11 but all in all it is a great poem

UnoMono

03/04/2010

I appreciate your observation very much..I shall correct it asap..thank you sir.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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