Sun Shine

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  • Nature

    Poem Commentary

    Whenever you are blessed with a brilliantly sunny day, be thankful..because it is rainy and dark somewhere else...

    Sun Shine

    Sun
    You shine upon me
    Your rays are forever radiant
    Without you I and Everything I know would not be
    ...
    How much I appreciate you exsist,
     could only be counted in time and distance
    ...
    For every star in the night sky,
    I see shine makes me even more thankful you are mine
    When your rise the darkness is confinded
    ...
    Even with your magnificant power,
    I still stare at you and will not be blind
    ...
    Sun please shine forever
    Forever you will shine



      Be Original(2010)

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    kesavkavumthara commented on Sun Shine

    03-28-2010

    I really appreciate all your poems...good in writing and sincere in expression..thanks...
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    BikemanRJ commented on Sun Shine

    03-14-2010

    I can almost feel the radiance and warmth of the sun on my skin in this image you have so perfectly painted of the sun. You have brought glory to its importance in our lives and atmosphere. Great poem. BiekmanRJ
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    UnoMono

    03/16/2010

    I am happy that my words inspire happy memories of the sun for you...UM

    jademelissa74 commented on Sun Shine

    03-05-2010

    The flow was liquid-like. Indeed, an amazing tribute to the sun! I love to let my imagination run wild...I can see the many avenues that this piece can lead to...I love the passion in which you managed to craft this poem. A great write indeed!
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    kage commented on Sun Shine

    03-04-2010

    this is a great tribute to the sun i to love it and put it to use to define those that i love
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    dahlusion commented on Sun Shine

    03-03-2010

    A powerful "Ode To The Sun" expressing love and longing in poetic language. Bravo!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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