BAD FEELINGS

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    BAD FEELINGS

     I HAVNT HAD A GREAT TIME WITH YOU BUT MAYBE WE CAN FIX THAT
    MAYBE WE COULD COME TOGETHER AND DISCUSS WHAT WE DID WRONG AND FORGIVE AND FORGET
    WHAT WE DECIDE I HAVE YET TO THINK ABOUT BECAUSE WE HAVENT TALKED SINCE I DONT KNOW HWEN
    MAYBE YOU DONT WANT TO FIX THIS FEUD BETWEEN US AND THAT WILL ONLY MAKE IT WORSE
    I HOPED WE COULD HAVE BEEN FRIENDS AFTER THE FIGHT BUT YOU SAY YOU HAVE TOO MANY FRIENDS ALREADY AND
    YOU SAY YOU DONT NEED ME
    WHAT AM I TO DO WITHOUT YOU? MAYBE MOVE ON
    I WANT TO WORK IT OUT BUT I GUESS HERE IS MY GOOD BYE TO YOU AND MAYBE YOU SHOULD SAY GOOD BYE TOO

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    Kanicki commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-10-2010

    Jordan just checking in precious and reading you again; something if those who hurt us are unwilling, not ready and/or perhaps unable due to their limitations to make things right and find resolve...sometimes we have to look within ourselves to make peace with a situation and/or someone and find the courage to move on...things will get better honey, they do and they will...have faith. Peace, Love and Light
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    Jordan98

    11/11/2010

    thanx for the confidence

    Olan01 commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-10-2010

    Thank you for writing this Jordan for we all have to write; it is what we do. You are young and hope you are feeling better, now.
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    Kanicki commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-06-2010

    Good Job Jordan - carthartic poetry we all need to write and read. Yes Jordan, the proper thing to do is have resolve; sometimes folks aren't mature enough to do the right thing...some you say farewell and some you say Goodbye. I wish you the best. Peace, Love and Light
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    Jordan98

    11/08/2010

    i just write what i feel soetimes it just depends what i am felling on that day

    Chaos128 commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-06-2010

    Very affecting thoughts, J. All you can do is make the opportunity for reconciliation available. After that it's up to whomever the opportunity is offered. I hope it works out.
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    Jordan98

    11/08/2010

    inspiration came from my ex boyfriends

    jessicanichole8 commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-05-2010

    that is so wrong hey i love u buddy. i will always be there for u
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    Jordan98

    11/05/2010

    thanx jess ur aleays there for me

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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