BAD FEELINGS

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    BAD FEELINGS

     I HAVNT HAD A GREAT TIME WITH YOU BUT MAYBE WE CAN FIX THAT
    MAYBE WE COULD COME TOGETHER AND DISCUSS WHAT WE DID WRONG AND FORGIVE AND FORGET
    WHAT WE DECIDE I HAVE YET TO THINK ABOUT BECAUSE WE HAVENT TALKED SINCE I DONT KNOW HWEN
    MAYBE YOU DONT WANT TO FIX THIS FEUD BETWEEN US AND THAT WILL ONLY MAKE IT WORSE
    I HOPED WE COULD HAVE BEEN FRIENDS AFTER THE FIGHT BUT YOU SAY YOU HAVE TOO MANY FRIENDS ALREADY AND
    YOU SAY YOU DONT NEED ME
    WHAT AM I TO DO WITHOUT YOU? MAYBE MOVE ON
    I WANT TO WORK IT OUT BUT I GUESS HERE IS MY GOOD BYE TO YOU AND MAYBE YOU SHOULD SAY GOOD BYE TOO

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    Kanicki commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-10-2010

    Jordan just checking in precious and reading you again; something if those who hurt us are unwilling, not ready and/or perhaps unable due to their limitations to make things right and find resolve...sometimes we have to look within ourselves to make peace with a situation and/or someone and find the courage to move on...things will get better honey, they do and they will...have faith. Peace, Love and Light
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    Jordan98

    11/11/2010

    thanx for the confidence

    Olan01 commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-10-2010

    Thank you for writing this Jordan for we all have to write; it is what we do. You are young and hope you are feeling better, now.
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    Kanicki commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-06-2010

    Good Job Jordan - carthartic poetry we all need to write and read. Yes Jordan, the proper thing to do is have resolve; sometimes folks aren't mature enough to do the right thing...some you say farewell and some you say Goodbye. I wish you the best. Peace, Love and Light
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    Jordan98

    11/08/2010

    i just write what i feel soetimes it just depends what i am felling on that day

    Chaos128 commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-06-2010

    Very affecting thoughts, J. All you can do is make the opportunity for reconciliation available. After that it's up to whomever the opportunity is offered. I hope it works out.
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    Jordan98

    11/08/2010

    inspiration came from my ex boyfriends

    jessicanichole8 commented on BAD FEELINGS

    11-05-2010

    that is so wrong hey i love u buddy. i will always be there for u
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    Jordan98

    11/05/2010

    thanx jess ur aleays there for me

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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