IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU

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    this is to tyler96

    IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU

    I love him.
    What would i do without him?
    i love him like i have never felt before
    he knows who he is
    i love you so much
    you are the center of my life  
    at first i didnt feel it but i know exactly how i feel now
    i would die without you




    I LOVE YOU WITH EVERYTHING I HAVE
    i dont know what i would do if i hadnt have told erika to tell you yes i think i would have regretted my decision and i am so grateful that we are now together i love you and i want you to know that 

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    faceofthelost commented on IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU

    11-20-2010

    if he messes up so bad, y do you take him back? you know the old saying, fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me. try to move on, you'll find you actually live without. nice poetry though. lots of feeling.
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    Jordan98

    11/22/2010

    i have moved on now.. Im glad he is out of my life. all that he did was cause complications in it and made it miserable

    Chaos128 commented on IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU

    11-03-2010

    Intense feeling described in an equal intensity that does them proper justice. You write with a genuine expressive voice. I shudder to think where it will take you as it develops. Excellent work!
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    Jordan98

    11/04/2010

    hey thanx i havent read any of ur poems but i will try to read them

    Jordan98 commented on IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU

    10-28-2010

    yes we r dating again and he said he wouldnt mess up this time and im the only one he thinks is hot and that he loves and he would die without me
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    Jordan98

    11/19/2010

    He lied and did mess up again worse than the first time and sent me hurdling to the bathroom to puke

    jessicanichole8 commented on IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU

    10-28-2010

    that is sweet r u guys dating again????? u love him so much!!!
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