YOU AND I? ME AND YOU?

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    YOU AND I? ME AND YOU?

     YOU SAY THAT WE BELONG TOGETHER AND WILL BE AN ITEM FOR A WHILE
    BUT HERE YOU GO AGAIN LEAVING ME ALONE TO FEND FOR MYSELF AND BREAKING MY HEART
    WE SHOULD STAY TOGETHER WE WERE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER BUT THEN AGAIN WHY DO YOU LEAVE ME
    ARE WE TOGETHER OR JUST ANOTHER TEMPORARY REALATIONSHIP THAT NEVER LASTS? JUST A SCHOOL FLING?
    I HOPE THAT WE ARE MORE THAN THAT BECAUSE OF THE SINCERE WAY YOU TALK TO ME ON THE PHONE AND HOW YOU
    TALK TO ME THROUGH THE DAY
    ARE WE OR ARE WE NOT TOGETHER
    MAYBE THIS LOVE WILL END
    BUT IF ITS UP TO ME OUR LOVE WILL BE IMMORTAL AND LIVE FOREVER
    IF I HAD CONTROL OVER EVERY EMOTION
    I WOULD LOVE YOU FOR THE REST OF MY IMMORTAL LIFE

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    cheronld commented on YOU AND I? ME AND YOU?

    11-25-2010

    The funny thing about this write is that as you get older you realize that while some things evolve....some things just never change....nice write...Cher
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    koolmom0 commented on YOU AND I? ME AND YOU?

    11-19-2010

    I have been there and done that. I tell you what honey, relationships are not easy, even when a person is all grown up. We grown ups still argue, complain and shed tears, and love. You write lovely words, I'll read for you anytime. :) Koolmom0)
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    Hampton commented on YOU AND I? ME AND YOU?

    11-19-2010

    Honest words flow seamlessly but they are not always heard. Relationships are built on mutual understanding and respect. If those ingredients are not present the relationship will surely face a bumpy road.
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    Teardrops commented on YOU AND I? ME AND YOU?

    11-15-2010

    i feel you emotions in every word . You are a very talented poetress thanks for the read Marie
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    babygirl4028 commented on YOU AND I? ME AND YOU?

    11-12-2010

    WHO?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? tell me. I need to know. This is a really good poem.
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    Jordan98

    11/12/2010

    somebody

    Jordan98

    11/15/2010

    im depressed someone dig me outta this big hole of remorse please

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

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