jordan98

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     hey yo
    you should go get a life
    i dont like how you bully ppl
    you hate everybody
    you torture little kids
    you have no life so you take every one elses away
    i hate what yo do so stop or i will stop you myself

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    Olan01 commented on jordan98

    11-10-2010

    This show a young girl with a strong will and that is what you need in this world. Good job.
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    devaamido commented on jordan98

    11-09-2010

    Are you talking to yourself or somebody else or both? As with your other poems, this one exhibits freedom of emotional expression, courage, insight & writing skills beyond your years. Good job!
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    ApaqRasgirl commented on jordan98

    10-10-2010

    nice write dear, good word choices on the poem builder to make a strong statement.........asha
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    Teardrops commented on jordan98

    10-10-2010

    This is an honorable cause but you cant fight everyones battles . Start small then as you help one they will help one and so on great poem Marie
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    Sx9 commented on jordan98

    10-09-2010

    PERSONAL PUSH,,WHERE IS THE INSPIRATION,,WE ALL FEEL LIKE THAT ABOUT ONE THING OR THE OTHER,,
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Jordan98’s Poems (16)

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    BAD FEELINGS 25 11/05/2010
    IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU 5 10/22/2010
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    when times are hard 6 10/12/2010
    love is sharing.... 10 10/10/2010
    jordan98 6 10/09/2010
    you will pay for what you took from me and my life 2 10/09/2010
    What Does Life Mean To Me 5 10/09/2010
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