jordan98

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jordan98

hey yo
you should go get a life
i dont like how you bully ppl
you hate everybody
you torture little kids
you have no life so you take every one elses away
i hate what yo do so stop or i will stop you myself

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Olan01 commented on jordan98

11-10-2010

This show a young girl with a strong will and that is what you need in this world. Good job.

devaamido commented on jordan98

11-09-2010

Are you talking to yourself or somebody else or both? As with your other poems, this one exhibits freedom of emotional expression, courage, insight & writing skills beyond your years. Good job!

ApaqRasgirl commented on jordan98

10-10-2010

nice write dear, good word choices on the poem builder to make a strong statement.........asha

Teardrops commented on jordan98

10-10-2010

This is an honorable cause but you cant fight everyones battles . Start small then as you help one they will help one and so on great poem Marie

Sx9 commented on jordan98

10-09-2010

PERSONAL PUSH,,WHERE IS THE INSPIRATION,,WE ALL FEEL LIKE THAT ABOUT ONE THING OR THE OTHER,,

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Jordan98’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
For all the ones I stil care about 2
To The Cheaters!! 3
The Single Gurl Swagger, Confidence 1
sweet Great Grandma 10
throw me a little harder and i might die 11
YOU AND I? ME AND YOU? 6
MY DAD AND I 13
BAD FEELINGS 25
IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU 5
Why did it have to end? 3
what it feels like to be stood up 2 times in a row 3
when times are hard 6
love is sharing.... 10
jordan98 6
you will pay for what you took from me and my life 2
What Does Life Mean To Me 5