Battlefield Painter

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Battlefield Painter

The painter plants the brush, sprouts a shrub
Atop the hill, beside a tree, beneath the sun:
The cannon roaring, the metal clashing
Is but a lull, a murmur to the concentration.
The conflict engulfing the easel gose unsensensed,
The eye breathes in the distance,
The hill-top, the tree, sun balanced above,
On the horizon, in the distance, withn the canvas.

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dumplin commented on Battlefield Painter

11-03-2009

I could picture this! (lol, not trying to be punny). There were just a couple of spelling errors in this, but you painted a vivid picture. I wish it were longer.

rougepriest commented on Battlefield Painter

10-18-2009

is this one from high school also, spelling and such would make one lean towards thinking so............, anything written lately/.? I am a painter so your first line caught my eye ( it wasnt breathing) kinda cool metaphor that one

lucindaclaire commented on Battlefield Painter

10-18-2009

Very Interesting! Check out the last line. "Withn"... Is it supposed to be "with in"?

Singcanary commented on Battlefield Painter

08-26-2009

love the creative thinker...can see your direction it takes me...the artist is the tool to expressing what "is". very nicely done...loved it

Dreamer123 commented on Battlefield Painter

07-31-2009

very peaceful. i love it. this made me relaxed. this is amazing. they way you put this poem together is amazing. great job. :D God Bless you.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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