Seasons of Lost Greetings

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  • itzamateo
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THis I wrote freshman year in H.S.  After reading Night by Elie Wiesel, a biographical work about the holocaust.

Seasons of Lost Greetings

 El Verano

The Sun is shining bright
as the children's faces
as they play until the
fall of night.

El Otonio

The bright green leaves
turn yellow as the stars
pinned on their clothes.
The leaves turn brown,
and they are given curfews
and sent to the center of town.
The least falls off the trees
when the final one enters the camps.

El Invierno

All the beautiful things in life are gone.
The birds have left, the flowers have died.
Of all human rights they have been denied.
The cold white snow has silenced their cries,
Their tears fall to the ground
as delicately as glistening snowflakes...
Nobody hears.

La Primavera

The flowers break through the oppressing snow
as it slowly melts down.
The truth is uncovered
like cold white blanket being lifted from our eyes.

Mateo Centeno © 1993

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ansari commented on Seasons of Lost Greetings

07-04-2010

The seasons and the human spirit, that's what I would call it. So metaphoric. thank you. a 10 from me.

Milagros commented on Seasons of Lost Greetings

11-03-2009

That's absolutely beautiful and thought-provoking.. I love it.

SuperChick76 commented on Seasons of Lost Greetings

11-03-2009

Wow, that's actually really beautiful, in a sad way. Enthralling. Good write. Don't really have much to say to that, only that it was indeed beautiful. But that's a good speechlessness.

lucky62 commented on Seasons of Lost Greetings

10-21-2009

Nice Mateo very well written and has nice flow and imagery.

KristyLoren commented on Seasons of Lost Greetings

09-02-2009

Nice lyrics, very envisioning. Warm and clear with powerful feeling. I enjoyed!!

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