Bends and Curves

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    • itzamateo
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    This I wrote back in high school.  Great poem, Stream of consciousness, Nature.     

    Bends and Curves

    Isn't it ironic
    that I'm writing a poem
    that I don't have anything to say
    that I mentioned everything in the last book
    which is out of print
    because the publisher is in exile
    living in my house in the tree.

    Isn't it beautiful
     the way the tree bends and curves
    impressions fron its youth,
    the way the sun
    shines through its leaves
    from which water
    sprinkles down to the earth
    from which it flow.

    Isn't it ironic that I'm writning this poem
     on the paper from the tree
    that bends and curves
    flows like the water through its roots.
    Water sprinkles from its leaves
     Leaves fall to the earth
    I drink from the earth, too.





    (c) Centeno1996

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    Milagros commented on Bends and Curves

    11-03-2009

    Isn't it ironic That I like a poem Written by someone With nothing to say? ;)

    HopeOhlarik commented on Bends and Curves

    11-02-2009

    nicely done. it flows very nicely and makes ya think.

    stellar commented on Bends and Curves

    10-28-2009

    Very nice revelation you out here through your poem...love this one..very insightful

    Troubador commented on Bends and Curves

    08-29-2009

    This is quite the descriptive work though it was short It does possess aspects that use improvement such as spelling and punctuation

    Lunesca commented on Bends and Curves

    08-28-2009

    Nice rendition. I like the way it flows and paints a picture.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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