Betrayed

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    Betrayed

     BETRAYED

    You betrayed me,
    I couldn't see.
    I trusted you,
    and what did you do?

    To me you had lied,
    I Believed YOU when you cried.
    I was betrayed,
    Yet still I stayed.

    I was believing,
    Through all of your decieving.
    For you the rules I would bend,
    Because I was your friend. 

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    rossmangeles commented on Betrayed

    06-30-2009

    Through thick and thin, though right or wrong, I will always be your friend. Betrayal puts crack on the glass. I commend you for being a loyal friend. I enjoy the poem and the message.
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    TiannaMarie

    08/11/2009

    Thank you. This is one that I wrote in 9th grade. Little did I know at the time-- this is one that continues throughout our lives. We try to trust that everyone has good intentions, but all too often find that the werent so good.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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