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     as sit there and stare at the blank page
    i wonder what to write about
    should it be
    could it be
    that maybe i just ran out of words to say

    nah that couldnt possibly be the answer
    I've never been at a lose for words
    what else is there
    what more could i say
    what more could i do
    am i truly scurred nah couldn't be


     

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    bhardwaj commented on blank

    09-17-2009

    More than blank, it should be called 'incomplete'. After you read it, you feel that there is more to come. Something is yet unsaid, waited for. Good poem, I learnt a unique dimension to poetry with this.
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    chubbc commented on blank

    09-15-2009

    interesting poem some typos but i liked it very well put
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    Chaos128 commented on blank

    09-14-2009

    Your words speak for themselves, and eloquently. With all due respect to dumplin, there is nothing more subjective (or more unique) then the thoughts of a poet, and the way the poet chooses to express those thoughts are the way their supposed to be! Courageous authorship, Aneesha
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    dumplin commented on blank

    09-03-2009

    There are several spelling and punctuation errors in this poem, but I see a talent here that needs to break out of it's shell. Be careful of errors in your next piece, and try to make it longer. Good luck!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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