Blatant Disreguard

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  • The World

    Blatant Disreguard

    Desperately searching for answers

    Secretly telling lies

    Does the truth really matter?

    What must we hide?

    Unable to communicate in our own families

    Are we all that busy?

    To not show our loved ones a little humanity

    We pray and say may thee forgive me

    Are you and me deserving?

    Fall to your knees and find out

    With all the people we’ve been hurting

    Do you think god wants us to be around?

    This desolate place used to be so beautiful

    We destroyed our gift

    Now were all so pitiful

    In a world that can’t be fixed

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    GreenGirl81 commented on Blatant Disreguard

    07-08-2009

    nice work again very deep! ; ) love it.............

    scrye commented on Blatant Disreguard

    07-08-2009

    I really liked the way you put your point out there, although i don't completely agree thats not what this is about. Great work and thought put together well. Good job keep it up

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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