Devious Exchange

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  • Dark Poetry

    Devious Exchange

    Sleeping in darkness, falling away

    Dying my heart rips, consumed I fade

    Will you watch me die?

    Will you watch me bleed?

    There’s no reason why

    I just want you to see

    See what real suffering is

    Only if you show me what its like to live

    I might never know on my own

    My life is despair I never had a home

    So open your soul and let me find

    All your dreams you keep inside

    Share with me the secrets you keep

    And I will share the pain you seek

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    tiffiny26 commented on Devious Exchange

    07-08-2009

    i love this one....the last line is my favorite line...people often flirt with pain but never really want to find it....thank you for putting that into words
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    davoc

    07/08/2009

    I know what you mean and thank you very much

    scrye commented on Devious Exchange

    07-08-2009

    I knew there was great talent in you and so glad to see you've been a bit busy posting new poems. You can bet i'll be reading every one of them. Great work, keep it up.
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    davoc

    07/08/2009

    Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    angellv commented on Devious Exchange

    07-08-2009

    I think this poem is awesome. I really like the second line and how creative your are with your words. A good poem is not only a feeling but a story. You have done well with both.
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    davoc

    07/08/2009

    Thank you very much!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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