bravery beats the coward

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    bravery beats the coward
    the ocean fills ones heart as deep as i love thee
    floods of desparation bring chaos from the sea
    in turn our love was tempted by sirens of self destruction
    should in time i stay with thee to flee from self extraction?
    the flood gates have stranded me fore i am indesicive
    the one thing i know is to hold and be possesive
    but letting go ,and you going is a leap and your not stepping
    say to me youll do whatever i need and the ocean wont stop letting

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    redbloodink commented on bravery beats the coward

    12-22-2009

    I gave this a 10........ not that points matter they sure don't make a great write red
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    redbloodink commented on bravery beats the coward

    12-22-2009

    I just like short writes' like this packed with over-whelming emotion...... red
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    qp commented on bravery beats the coward

    03-02-2009

    "jadeinblu",you obviously are a great poet, honest, emotional, and bold. thankyou for sharing. www.preetworks.com, nyc peace qp
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    writerspassion commented on bravery beats the coward

    01-23-2009

    very well put!! Lve the emotions
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    fastdetailer commented on bravery beats the coward

    01-05-2009

    very beutiful and you'r not bad either
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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