lennon

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music, the ultimate sign of immortality !

lennon

graceful, dying in a pool of dismay, written in a banket of life,was he to be immortal ?
bended ,a thought of life, remorse for leaving that day... he is so heavy...allure...to be born when he lost life...and to bring tears
to mine own eye from words and melodies pouring ....and i merely a
child...remnant of ....loss.....i want you so badd....
 

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

jadienblu’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
dripping in the memory of a recent past 1
lennon 1
wtf? 7
Sanction 10
exit 5
silly lil' nightmares 7
slideways on a heartstring..
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6
p.s. dreaming of you 10
p.s. dreaming of you 3
Evaporated 4
UNTILTED 7
a small notion of childhood 16
bravery beats the coward 8
coming through in waves as she panics 6
Fled to Death 13
'long walks to nowhere' 8