p.s. dreaming of you

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    p.s. dreaming of you

    a smile crept into view
    as my headlights were set on you
    as it eased its way across

    suddenly i was struck by loss
    nothing left to remind me
    ,only you and i cannot find thee
    agony ,is the name of my past

    in its return i breath at last
    taking in your essence and life
    holding my hopes way up high
    the smile crept out of view
    as i drove further away from you
    in a moment of brief solitude
    abruptly interrupted by attitude
    much like love but never a sweet
    ill dream of uniting until we meet
    sweet thang think of me too
    p.s. dreaming of you


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    bjroach55 commented on p.s. dreaming of you

    04-25-2009

    was just looking at some things aabout your poetry and you feel to me as very emotional this is a good thing sometimes i do not communicate to a person to well sorry about that . also you are talented.

    dahlusion commented on p.s. dreaming of you

    03-09-2009

    So why are you insulting the winning poets by insinuating that their work is not worth a winner? This poem is good but by no means exceptional. Too many cliches and pedestrian-like expressions.

    pocketofdreams6 commented on p.s. dreaming of you

    03-08-2009

    Oh this one's beautiful!

    xxlheart commented on p.s. dreaming of you

    01-30-2009

    beautiful picture and a beautiful poem. nothing to say here you delivered this quite well and i love true emotions!!

    lovethoseclones commented on p.s. dreaming of you

    01-27-2009

    inspires intrigue??? Love indeed yet a dark side maybe?

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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