coming through in waves as she panics

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    coming through in waves as she panics

    blood surges and wine pleases me sweetly
    the pain rolls in and paves me over neatly
    i can get trough this for i know it is the end
    i cant say im ruined ,there is room to mend
    my eyes drip and my body does convulse
    deep within my viens my heart sends a mild pulse
    if tomorrow doesnt come for me well i hope you all know
    that the pain finally rooled over me and i feel no more

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    redbloodink commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    12-25-2009

    truly amazing........................................... red

    monkyntz commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    05-18-2009

    beautifully painful keep up the good work

    writerspassion commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    01-23-2009

    sometimes I wish the pain would just end. Very heartfelt for me

    Phoenix9 commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    12-31-2008

    very nicely done

    allenjermy commented on coming through in waves as she panics

    12-22-2008

    i like this one,short but very good. You are a true poet...Don Folks

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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