Break free

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Break free

I want to run 
as far as I can,
Away from this place 
to never see it again.

But the more I try 
to break free from here,
the more I get tangled 
to the roots of this fear. 

Where can I go?
Who do I run to? 
When do I stop?
Or shall I forever continue?

My mind is a mess.
My heart is broken.
My thoughts are in chaos.
My emotions dark and sunken.

Tell me, how can I run?
When my feet are planted to the ground.
Show me, how can I break free?
When the key to this lock can never be found.

It started with a seed,
that slowly grew into a tree.
Only now did i notice,
now that i can no longer flee…

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inkmaster commented on Break free

11-26-2009

Very nicely writen I enjoyed it a bit sad though.................... Inkmaster

frostyfries

11/26/2009

Thanks you. ^_^

Hiporlacking commented on Break free

11-25-2009

I enjoyed this. I'm not sure what your situation is. Or if this poem even speaks of your own experience. But I do know that it is unhealthy to run away. Usually our problems lie deeper than that.

frostyfries

11/26/2009

Thanks. No, I don't think running away solves anything either. ^_^

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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