breaking

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    breaking

     i lie my head down
    and softly i break
    because i'm everything you ask for
    but nothing you'l take

    i'd romance you and make you
    and give you the wold
    i'd give you everything u wanted
    if you'd just be my girl

    i'd lay down beside you
    i'd hold you close
    i'd tell you the truths
    i've loved you the most

    i'd be anything you wanted
    everything you ask ov me
    but i'm nothing to you
    and my heart wants to b free. 

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    CatsMeow commented on breaking

    01-07-2018

    Correct your spelling.. "everything you ask ov me".. nice poem..
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    JaneDoe commented on breaking

    03-24-2011

    your sister kellie: i reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllly like it nice job sis ^_^
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    ahardwalk commented on breaking

    12-01-2010

    Very sad emotionally felt poem!!!! It sucks when you start loving someone who doesn't want anything to do with you!!
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    thecross commented on breaking

    11-30-2010

    a sad write that seems to be getting a bit more and more common in today's world of love.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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