bruises

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    bruises

     its that gorgeous grin
    that just sucks you in
    and he wont let you go
    and you dont want him to know
    that you dont want him to leave
    you just hope that you could be
    the one he calls special
    you love his eyes
    and hope what he says are lies
    you dont want him to hurt himself
    and yet you let him hurt you
    you wont admit that what i say is true
    that he's got your skin black and blue
    you know you're one in many
    but you still love his company
    it drives you crazy
    because you might have his baby
    he treats you like crap
    your stuck in his trap
    thats exactly what he wanted
    he makes you feel like dirt
    when he drags you by your shirt
    you try to learn to just deal with it
    you gotta get out of that relationship
    because slowly your losing grip

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    bluewolf commented on bruises

    03-26-2010

    In 2005 there were 1,181 women murdered in the U.S.; 1/3 of those were battered women. The psychological trap of an abusive relationship is a catacomb of traps, fear and doubts. While women and children are the predominant focus when abusive relationships are brought to mind; men, though to a lesser degree perhaps, have dealt with such issues as well. According to a study 40% of all cases each year are domestic abuse against men.
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    ayyan commented on bruises

    02-07-2010

    good poem and sensible love and looking through real life in the form of poetic words. i like it very much. all the best - ayyan -
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    kpeery09 commented on bruises

    01-16-2010

    Very Nice my friend, its what I would call beautifully written, you sure do know how to speak your mind through poetry which is a good thing. I give you 10
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    SilverGirl commented on bruises

    01-16-2010

    A very heartfelt writing hun. I can appreciate where you're coming from, but emotionally, not pshyically. You did a great job painting a picture in my mind.. Tis a sad picture, but a great poem. Keep up the good work. Hugs SG.. P.S. DO NOT live in a relationship like that.. you are young and beautiful and there are many men who would treat you like a queen.. even if you already have a baby. Do NOT fear starting life over. You can do it.. Hugs and love.. SG Marie
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    raych33

    01/16/2010

    the man i have a baby with, is not this little boy who hurt me, hes not the one i write about cuz i can only write bout ppl who have hurt me or have left me. its sad but true. i cant write positively

    SilverGirl

    01/16/2010

    Ah, but you can. Can't is a negative, you are setting yourself up for failute before you even start. Read some of my things... Eternal Love. Cerebration Only Mine.. Your Hardened Heart.. I only have 20 some poems but they aren't long. I think you may gain something from reading them.. not that I am all that.. lol. But you will see, although I have felt pain... I can write of love as well. Hugs SG Marie.. Give it a try ;)

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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