Candy Covered Misery

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Candy Covered Misery

Don't trust him,
He is a cheater,
He lives double lives,
No time for heaters.

Run away right now,
Do it carefully,
You need ro understand,
He is a candy covered misery.

Maybe he should think
before he cheats,
with you, that would be bad,
Does he wants beats?

He is a condy covered misery!

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bigred commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-28-2010

I like this, but I think more could have been written here. Great heading for the poem. No one deserves a cheater. Useless. Misery loves company anyway Nice Job here.

Teardrops commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-24-2010

you use candy to discribe this person very well loved the poem thank s for the read Marie

Po8ree commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-24-2010

A beautifully written poem full of raw emotions, showing the pain

Springsize commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-23-2010

Absolute creativity here... --- "candy covered misery" ...

Rhymer commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-23-2010

Like biting into a piece of chocolate and finding a garlic filling, enjoyed the read and the metaphors. Nice piece.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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